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“Now I lay me down to sleep
A sorry rhyme my soul doth weep
Chanting, craving, wanting more,
Please give what I’ve been searching for…

Dreams of scandal,
Dreams of lust
Dreams of what I want for us…

Hopes for lovers,
Hopes for fate,
Hopes for whispers, dark and late…

Make me breathless,
Make me plead,
Make me want you, make me need…

Hold me closer,
Hold me tight,
Hold off morning’s placid light…

Keep me safe,
Keep me warm,
Keep me here until the dawn…

Wish I may,
Wish I might,
Have this wish I wish tonight…"
©2006-2009 ~superstitious13
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Author's Comments

It's usually when we go to bed that we truly start to think about things.
Sometimes it's something we shouldn't think about
Actually, usually it isn't.

Anyways, sorry it rhymes...it just started rhyming when I started writing, and it wouldn't stop:S...

<3Always,
Cor

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:icon24-hours:
aww it's really nice! I like it a lot!
My mind goes crazy when I'm trying to fall asleep, and when I'm sleeping. I jave some of the craziest dreams ever and some of the best.

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:iconjayman777:
Yet again, awesome stuff Cort. Not gonna lie, I often don't get to sleep becuase my mind is going nuts thinking about that day, and the next... anything and everything that may happen in the days to come... not always the best thing... I'd much rather just sleep.

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:iconsuperstitious13:
Aww, thank you hon...yeah, it can be a bitch, especially the morning after when you can't quite remember why you're so sleep deprived.

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:iconsuperstitious13:
:blush:thank you, sweetheart. I think it's something we all experience, and all hate equally as much.

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:iconvalidscribles:
very nicely done my dear; i can relate and i know what you're talking about :P

i always seem to get my best ideas right before i fall asleep, and hope i'll remember them in the morning (which i never do of course). so i've decided i want to keep a mini tape recorder next to my bed so i can keep track of my ideas, lol.

but anyway, very nice, and neat that you took something that was already in existance and elaborated on it! :glomp:

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" Joel, I'm not a concept. Too many guys think I'm a concept or I complete them or I'm going to make them alive, but I'm just a fucked up girl who is looking for my own peace of mind. Don't assign me yours. "

- Clemintine
:iconxdarkbeauty73x:
you did a good job with the rhyming.. I can relate to the inspiration you get just before falling to sleep. Nice work

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xoxoxo Melanie
:iconiamnotepad:
Love it :) good job doll :) I love how you put in other bedtime things..:)
:icon24-hours:
Yeah, sometime's I like it sometimes a don't. I hate it when i can't fall asleep because of it though.

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Wolves are making a comeback, details at 11.
Here's your cheese :cheese:

I am a member of the NaturPics-club [link]
:iconsuperstitious13:
<3 thank you baby. Know what i love? You!

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-The China Doll

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